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Before I critique, I'd just like to say you got an amazing download. I wish I could make content like this...or any content. I'm just a gamer who hits the 'c' key.
I'm not a fan of numbers in a critique, as there's no context by which to rate them. But..
VISION-7/10
ORIGINALITY-5/10
TECHNIQUE-5/10
ART IMPACT-7/10
COMPLETE RATING-6/10
I looked at the full 'Queen' you have for download, and she's very impressive. My critique is based solely on the headshot you provided.
-The eyes are creeping me out. Not the color, just the angle at which you took the screenie. They look a little like a 'Volks' dolls-from this angle, as if they don't fill up the entire socket. I'm sure the fact that this is 'Sims 2' makes it more difficult.
-I don't like where you chose to crop her head. You've got the wonderful, ornate collar, but it's cut off, as is the top of her very pretty head. This is where I took points off for 'technique' on the critique.
-I like her hair, skin, and make-up. Very much in keeping with the royal ideal (and the Queen of Hearts). No complaints.
-I'm fine with the sharper, defined facial features. It seems to be a popular character style, and you carry it throughout the displayed creation.
Wonderful, unique sim you've created, from the sim to the clothing. I wish we could see more of that in the headshot. Still a great pic.
I'm not a fan of numbers in a critique, as there's no context by which to rate them. But..
VISION-7/10
ORIGINALITY-5/10
TECHNIQUE-5/10
ART IMPACT-7/10
COMPLETE RATING-6/10
I looked at the full 'Queen' you have for download, and she's very impressive. My critique is based solely on the headshot you provided.
-The eyes are creeping me out. Not the color, just the angle at which you took the screenie. They look a little like a 'Volks' dolls-from this angle, as if they don't fill up the entire socket. I'm sure the fact that this is 'Sims 2' makes it more difficult.
-I don't like where you chose to crop her head. You've got the wonderful, ornate collar, but it's cut off, as is the top of her very pretty head. This is where I took points off for 'technique' on the critique.
-I like her hair, skin, and make-up. Very much in keeping with the royal ideal (and the Queen of Hearts). No complaints.
-I'm fine with the sharper, defined facial features. It seems to be a popular character style, and you carry it throughout the displayed creation.
Wonderful, unique sim you've created, from the sim to the clothing. I wish we could see more of that in the headshot. Still a great pic.